This has a great deal of potential, but I have to ask, why is it Lois cannot get along with other women?
It seems to me that Vicki Vale would be the perfect friend for her. Especially since she's a photographer not a reporter.
Let see what happens next.
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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