This was fun. Well done.
My two favorite lines were:
“There was a bomb,” she said dumbly. “He… he…” Her brow furrowed. “He didn’t eat it?” Why would she say that?
Interesting how your use of a question mark there makes it so much funnier than if you'd put a period. Love that she asks herself why she would think that he would eat the bomb. Clark's "not this time" was cute, too.
“But I’m needed back at the Planet… on the planet, planet Earth,” Superman said, as if she would confuse her planet with any other.
Clark's mistake and quick cover-up were funny, but the "as if she would confuse her planet with any other" just cracked me up.
Looking forward to reading more...
