Totally excellent! Pressed all the right buttons for me, and I especially liked the backchat between Clark and Lois. Trust Clark to be the one who reads the stories and says nice things about them, whereas Lois doesn't trust those devious writers one inch. laugh And getting Lois to go after the *real* culprits, the beta readers, was an extra-funny moment. smile

Yvonne
(Connell <-------- oh, look, there's no 'y') laugh