hee hee! Great story! And, it's technically still BR Appreciation Day here. I like how irritated Lois is and the fact that Clark actually enjoys the stories. Typical! He would think so!

Great story!

Jana (who has thoroughly enjoyed the great stories this day has inspired and thinks it should be a yearly event!)

Loved it!

Especially the "I missed the twirl!"

Nice job, and really true for this writer, as Labrat really taught me the ropes, as well.

CC

Totally excellent! Pressed all the right buttons for me, and I especially liked the backchat between Clark and Lois. Trust Clark to be the one who reads the stories and says nice things about them, whereas Lois doesn't trust those devious writers one inch. And getting Lois to go after the *real* culprits, the beta readers, was an extra-funny moment.

Yvonne
(Connell <-------- oh, look, there's no 'y')

Aw, shucks. Ursie this was hilarious and, hey, I get my name in a story title - I'm famous!

Thanks for the sweet compliments. There are worse things to be to blame for. <g>

Eeeep! /me scurries into hiding...oh no,wait a minute, hang on...is Clark with her...? /me goes off to find just the right thing to wear...where's my hair gel...what did I do with that really nice butterfly clip....

LabRat (who really didn't think it stank at all... <g> )

P.S. Any more to post in the queue, Ursie?

What a great story - imagine waking up to find Lois standing in your bedroom glowering at you!

Loved the interplay between Lois and Clark - could totally see Clark as a "big softie" who loves reading long, angsty fanfics.

Thanks for such a sweet story!

Lynn

Sweet
and funny

Great story, had a lot of fun reading it.

Julia

ROFL!!

Ditto everyone else, Ursie - this was great!!!


Wendy

I'm so sorry, Yvonne! That was unforgivable, to spell your name incorrectly. What was I thinking - umm, I wasn't thinking too much of anything - it was 3:00am. :rolleyes:

I concur! In fact, I said so in another thread already. We should have a special day to honor the FDK Bunch. And that includes you, too, Jose!

I'm struggling with the sequel to TAS. My wonderfully eagle-eyed beta Tricia shot a lot of holes in my very first chapter and I'm trying to fix what she so severely (but rightfully) threw out the window. Another example of how very valuable our beta's are!

I'm so glad you enjoyed this little story, Jana, CC, Lynn, Julia, Yvonne, Jose, LabRat and Wendy. Your comments made me from ear to ear.

Ursie

Very Original and very cute<g> Laura

WOW! I just discovered this, Ursula.

Tricia

Nice, Ursie!! Very fun

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Tricia, I'm glad you spotted this story, otherwise I'd really have had to send you an email.

I'm so glad you liked it.

And you too, Laura and Anna. Thanks for letting me know.

Ursie

Ursie
nicely done
very funny
merry

Thanks, Merry, I'm glad I could make you smile.

Make sure you don't miss Wendy's very funny Christmas present for FDK givers A Labour of Love. You have a guest appearance in that one!

Ursie

Loved it, Ursie.

Loriel

I'm glad you liked it, Loriel.

Incidentally, I've just discovered that I totally forgot to make a TOC. :rolleyes:

I'd better get on to it then.

Ursie