Coming to the party a little late, I see that everyone has already expressed everything I was thinking, from the primal screams at Lois's misunderstanding (twice!) to the banging the head against the wall when she rejected his kiss. ROTFL, did I say how much I'm enjoying this story.
Oh, Martha, you are SO dead! LOL! I'd kill her and I think Clark may have something to say on the subject, too.
Poor Clark, poor Lois ... but I love the way Lois decides that she's not going to wallow anymore, but is going to fight for her man. But couldn't you have come to that realization in the taxi, Lois???? We could be enjoying afterglow on the ceiling right now!!!!
Operation Knock Some Sense into Blockhead Clark.
But this, of course, is worth the price of admission.
Go Lois, go Clark, go Wendy! I want part 9! (And 10 and 11 and ... oh wait, only 10 parts? Nope, gotta write some more. <g>)
Kathy
