I really liked that point you brought up about Marcus, and I think that came across really well in the chapter. I liked that scene a lot. Marcus' interactions with both Lois and Clark was great- I really love his character.

They're on the right track for the investigation. Church, Costmart, Faraday leaks and his device.

And the end... wow! Craziness ensuing! Poor Clark/Superman! Why do I get the feeling that it's gonna be the same crowd that they're after, knowing Superman is blind? And Mayson... wave


Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness.
--Mark Twain