Very nice, CC! It's very interesting to see what you're doing. The introspection on all four of them is great. Right now I feel very sorry for Clark and Lane. But somehow I think they'll find a way to comfort each other too.
You've brought up a good point about Wells showing up. It can take a long time. So they'd be stuck in the other worlds. Then what? I'm not sure it'd be so good to switch them again. It feels right somehow.
But I'm sure looking forward to more.
Wendy already brought up 'Loes.' I don't like that name either. I see it as a Dutch name, so it's hardly likely that it's being used in English. I'm even finding it hard to imagine the English pronounciation of it.
Saskia
