Comments - And Back Again (5/10) - 11/17/03 07:05 AM
I see no one's started the folder yet, so I'll be back to sob into it once I've finished the installment...
OK. Is that enough? I'm not sure.
At first I was absolutely infuriated with Lane for trying to trick Clark like that. How could she do this to him at a time like this - possibly make him waste precious time, even though there's nothing he can do? Yes, as always you know where my sympathies lie.
But when I saw the reasoning behind it, as angry as it made me, I realized that this was probably an important step that Lane would have to take to realize that she is not just a substitute in alt-Clark's mind. So, grudgingly, I can see her pov...
And the moment when Clark realized that Lois was gone was just as powerful, as full of agony as I expected you would write it. Of course he knew, once he got a good look at her. The guilt, the knowledge, just as I predicted. His images of Lois with alt-Clark. Ohmigod...
And Lois and alt-Clark probably need to have this conversation too.
I hope I can survive the next two days, waiting for your next post. This is so good, CC.
Kathy
OK. Is that enough? I'm not sure.
At first I was absolutely infuriated with Lane for trying to trick Clark like that. How could she do this to him at a time like this - possibly make him waste precious time, even though there's nothing he can do? Yes, as always you know where my sympathies lie.
But when I saw the reasoning behind it, as angry as it made me, I realized that this was probably an important step that Lane would have to take to realize that she is not just a substitute in alt-Clark's mind. So, grudgingly, I can see her pov...
And the moment when Clark realized that Lois was gone was just as powerful, as full of agony as I expected you would write it. Of course he knew, once he got a good look at her. The guilt, the knowledge, just as I predicted. His images of Lois with alt-Clark. Ohmigod...
And Lois and alt-Clark probably need to have this conversation too.
I hope I can survive the next two days, waiting for your next post. This is so good, CC.
Kathy