As always, my friend, lovely writing. I love the progression of Lois' thoughts and feelings, and the fact that she's willing and able to recognize and admit how she's changed. That's one of the things that I love about the show - watching all of the characters grow and change. It's one of the things that really sets LnC apart from other Superman movies and stories (well, the ones I've seen anyway - and I never did get into Smallville). It's especially gratifying to see the changes in Lois, as well as Clark's acceptance of both halves of his life.
I look forward to your next story with baited breath.
