I don't think any of us tire of reading these type of stories, AntiKryptonite, otherwise why would we keep checking the MB hour on end?
Clark is a man of few words--and when I say few, I mean *few*. But, really, he doesn't have to say much.
Could it just be, because he can't get a word in edgewise, Lois?
Things like 'Stay here tonight?'
Did Clark say that to Lois?
The whole section about when Lois though Clark had died... Heartmoving.
Enjoyed your story.