Beautiful, as always! I was certain that you'd take the sense of hearing from Clark's POV, so using Lois was sheer brilliance! You are a very poetic writer--and I second ViriginaR in that we never will get tired of reading these kind of stories!
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.
You are a very poetic writer--and I second ViriginaR in that we never will get tired of reading these kind of stories! 
