I'm really enjoying this so far. You're a very professional writer and it's a lot of fun to read!
You've set up an excellent plot with a lot of drama.
I love Star! What's funny is that she's really right on, but nobody but us readers know it! She did appear in ML Thompson's recent Kerth-winning fic,
"Nowhere To Run" .
I'm also really happy to learn that there are ten chapters and the chapters are long! Yay!
Here's hoping that no giant asteroid interferes with your posting schedule.
