Hey Annie,
I just caught up with this and it's great! I like the gossip that gets Lois scared. I like her decision to break up. And the conversation in the last part is fantastic too.
It's just a great end to the series.
As to the revenge for the gossipers, I agree with you. There's no need for that. However, I did miss (just a tiny little bit) a part where they came out as a couple to stop the gossip. Okay, you'd get other sorts of gossip then, but just to stop what got Lois so upset in the first place. And in all of the series, Lois and Clark hid their feeling from the rest of the world. So that's what I would have liked to see.
But the way you have it now is okay too. It's such a sweet ending with the 'proposal'! It would be a shame if you changed that.
Saskia
