Annie,
This was a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing!
I have a little problem with this last section. Don’t get me wrong – I love how you managed to resolve the cliffhanger from the previous section while supplying us with some WAFFy and steamy moments.
I just felt like Clark’s concern about making love so early in their relationship was not fully resolved.
Clark explains to Lois that he wants to take things slowly since he’s afraid as she can decide to end the relationship at any point. But, when she asks him to make love to her – without saying anything about her commitment to the relationship – he agrees. Now, I understand that they are both passionate people in a very passionate situation
but, I would still expect this point to be resolved before they make love rather then after.
Avia
