Well done, if somewhat painful to read. As I mentioned in my feedback for part 1, I have a tough time watching this part of their story arc on TV. I hurt too much on both of their behalf. It is a testament to your writing abilities that I am still following your story.

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And if a frog had wings, he wouldn’t bump his butt when he hopped!
Thank you for that much-needed injection of humour.

Joy,
Lynn