Well done, if somewhat painful to read. As I mentioned in my feedback for part 1, I have a tough time watching this part of their story arc on TV. I hurt too much on both of their behalf. It is a testament to your writing abilities that I am still following your story.

Thank you for that much-needed injection of humour.

Joy,
Lynn

I agree with Lynn - it is not my favourite part of the L&C story either, because Clark being a lunkhead/noble just doesn't provide good consequences.

But I am enjoying the story and cannot wait for the next part!

hahaha, favorite line:

And if a frog had wings, he wouldn’t bump his butt when he hopped!


hmm intrigue, who's this patrick character? will he be a lex luthor type villain, or just serious competition for clark? interesting

Excellent story SQD. I am REALLY loving this story. This part of the LnC relationship was hard to watch but I'm hoping everything ends up okay in your story as well...

And Flowerpot, I don't presume to know how SQD is going to write Patrick, but so far she's following the LnC canon so I would say that Patrick is the same guy from the LnC episode WIEAK, Season 3 ep. 4.

Great part, Squid!

Clark was really possessive in "Contact", in a very bad way. He wanted to break up with Lois and at the same time he wanted to control her. Admittedly he really just wanted to protect her. But he couldn't really accept that he doesn't own Lois, and he has no say at all about what she is going to do if he has broken off with her.

Yes, it sounded dumb because it was dumb! But go, Martha!

I really liked that Lois auctioned herself off. Of course, it is definitely possible that she has dived right in without checking the water level first. Again.

Looking forward to part 3 of this!

Ann

I completely forgot about the green-eyed monster. No idea where you're taking this, so please, more?

Michael

Most interesting! I am impatient to see if this Patrick is like L&C canon, in which case, Lois definitely jumps in without checking the water level.

Great writing, and hope we won't have to wait too long to see your next installment!

Thank you!

Where is part three! Everyday I've been checking the boards to see if you've posted more. More, please! More!!