Just popping in to add my thoughts - most of which you've already heard - to the FDK you've received for a fantastic story.
I love the final scene. You tie everything together, throw in a little piece of canon with Lois being unwilling to apologise to Clark and make us smile because she admitted she was ashamed of herself to Clark, but just didn't know it was him.
Great story, Iolanthe.
Corrina.
