Eeeeeek!
Oh, this is not good. Not good at all. And this is only part 1! You're gonna kill me.
Very well written, tho. I loved that first section, just with the little bits of dialog back and forth... and Tempus -- well, I could just hear his voice.
Darn it, how dare you string me along in installments? I need to know what happens next... actually, I just need to know that everything will come out fine, and I'm pretty sure it will because this *is* L&C fanfic after all, but there's always just this teeny tiny bit of niggling doubt...
PJ
chewing her fingernails