OK, CC, I'm hooked! I just have to know where Lois has been sent! How will she ever get out of this mess.
Awesome job at capturing Tempus's way of speaking. I could totally hear him drawling the word "darlin'"! He's just the perfect villain to pull off this kind of thing - devious and clever.
Also very interesting how you've alluded to the passage of time and that Superman has also disappeared. Yikes! He must be going nuts wondering what happened to Lois.
Can't wait for part 2
Lynn
