No, it's not ruined, Hap.
I admit to going "Aww
" just a little bit, but you worked it in quite nicely in a way that makes sense and enhances the story. ^^ Now, Ironically, I'm waiting for Lois to tell him everything. *g*
This fic is full of good things.
I know I've been sparse in commenting due to RL issues, but I'm still following along, waiting with bated breath for each new chapter.
Keep 'em coming, Hap!
