Sonia, I think it's time we got caught up on these two. I still want to know if Lois will trust Clark with the whole story of her dual identity. And I want to know if Clark will trust Lois with his history. I want to know if Chloe will agree to record a duet album with Lois. I want to know if Clark ever gets to Metropolis, much less to the Daily Planet.

This is a very good story. I have the sense that it went in a slightly different direction than you'd originally intended, but it's still a very good story. Please come back and finish it as soon as RL allows!

Thanks.


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- Stephen King, from On Writing