Yay, Sonia! Welcome back!
You write post-adolescent emotional angst like a pro. Can't wait to see where this is going next.
And Perry! What a hoot! I can tell you're having fun putting familiar people into a very different setting.
This L & C are younger and therefore immature, and your'e doing a great job of showing that. Can't wait to see what Martha and Perry cook up. Something tells me the two of them know each other from way back.