Ooooh, a sequel to "100 Meters"! My first thought was, what an unexpected and pleasant surprise. But, yikes! "Pleasant" doesn't really describe this first chapter, does it? Lois's use of anger as an expression of her grief is perfectly believable. Poor Clark. Dying a second death.
I'm glad to know your muse didn't just leave you (and us) here for long!
Off to read chapter 2, and see what happens next....