Great, Sara. Bravo! thumbsup

You are a really talented writer.

One little comment:

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I catch up with her a few hundred metres from the ground
How tall was the building? Considering every floor at 2 and a half metres... with a few hundred metres, say, 300... at least 120 floors. I don't think Lois would choose such a tall building to jump from.

Anyway, I love it and I'm looking forward to seeing more.

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

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