I am thoroughly enjoying this story! It's creative, without being completely out there, and it has a strong plot to follow for the next two parts.
Two questions, though:
1)How did Dan Scardino come onto the scene in the first place? If Mayson didn't die, than Dan wouldn't be involved in her investigation of the "Resurrection" drug.
I'm interested to see if you'll deal with his initial appearance.
2)Is Mayson D.A. or A.D.A? I could've sworn in the show she was an assistant D.A., but you may have changed it in your story. I wasn't sure.
Just a couple points to consider, if you haven't done so already.
But, awww... poor Clark. I'd be feeling completely rejected if I was dumped for a guy with an ugly 90's mullet, too.
Now if only we could have some little bird fly around her and plant scandalous thoughts of Clark in her head...
Fantastic story, though, and I'm adding it to my WIP reading list.
-Jo
