Terry,
This continues to be terrific. I really feel like I know many of the characters, and considering how many of them are original to this fic, that's saying a lot.
The back story of Lois and Lucy's life is incredible and it seems like it may explain some of the differences between our Lois and this one - perhaps she would already be at the Planet if her sister hadn't fallen in love with music.
I'm waiting eagerly for Christie's murder to be solved, although I suspect that won't happen until close to the end. But I can see so much potential for that part of the Metro Club story to really bring Lois and Clark together. I can only guess that Clark, who doesn't know any of the band members that well, might suspect Lucy did it (in addition to the police doing so).
