Alisha,
This was truly a fresh idea and I can’t congratulate you enough for your willingness to take on such an fascinating and challenging idea.
As I said in FDK to earlier parts, at times I struggled with Clark’s behavior and motivation. However, on the whole I’ve been really impressed at your vision for that paths that both Lois and Clark might have taken if Lois would have revealed Superman’s identity. I was quite pleased with how you brought them together and this final chapter provides an excellent restart on their relationship.
There is probably much more to say, but it really comes down to a simple, “Well done!” This was really a pleasure to read.
Bob
