Oh my...When Elisabeth told me that this was a great story, I knew I wouldn't be disappointed.
My Beloved has a gift for understatement, apparently.
This story ROCKS!
I only have one little niggle.
Lois should have swept Clark's house for bugs. If Clark is getting to be that big a thorn, he should have tried to bug Kent's place.
Of course there wouldn't be any, because Clark would have found them and gotten rid of them.
Lois should be surprised at the lack of electronic bugs.
Of course, that would get rid of the whole naive key under the mat scene...
James, who can't wait for the next installment.