Loving this so far, your characterisation of people (both major and minor characters) using a first person narrative is amazing, not to mention you've got Lois spot on. I completely believe that this is what she'd be like given her current circumstances.

Hope she and Clark get Luthor and Trask dealt with quickly so they can get down to more important things laugh

Looking forward to more thumbsup


All right... all right... but apart from better sanitation and medicine and education and irrigation and public health and roads and a freshwater system and baths and public order... what have the Romans done for us?