Yes, I agree with Elizabeth. The change from Clark's perspective to Lois' was very natural and did a nice recap. Maybe in part 3 there will be both, but whatever is good for you. We're giving positive feedback because we are enjoying the story and your prose. Your stories have been very well written. Many of us are "good English" fanatics. You'll get less paranoid as you write more. You have natural early writer syndrome.
Regards
Artemis
