As always, feedback welcome.
I hope it's not too "sugary" to be enjoyable. As with "Door Slams" I wrote this without a beta reader other than my wife and I suspect she may be a bit biased in my favor.
I want to stress that I am very open to feedback, even if it’s of the more critical variety. If anyone has comment and or suggestions relating to what I may be doing wrong, I would like to hear it (at least I think I do
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If anyone has a comment that they don't feel comfortable posting, please PM me. If I don't know what I'm doing wrong I can't learn.
Don't get me wrong. I LOVE positive feedback. I just wanted to say that I am also open to well-intended critical comments.
Bob
