Hi Anna!
What an intriguing start to your story.
With a peculiar twist: Lois falling for Clark right away.
With unanswered questions to peek the readers' curiosity: what about Clark's feelings for Lois? What about that rape story? (although, like Pam, I'm not sure I really want to know....)
Can't wait to find out what you'll give us next...keep posting
Sira - curious and (im)patient
