Hi Anna!
I loved the plot!!! Lois falling in love with Clark as soo as she met him it's very good and a different way to see our so great Mad Dog Lane behave towards Clark. I love when I can see a twist from an episode especially The Pilot that it's one of my favorites.
Oh I loved this part:
Lois had turned her head towards the door, but then had to turn back and slap her mouth with her hand, to keep herself in control. She had never seen such a handsome man. Tall, with a nice body, black hair, brown eyes and such a beautiful expression on his face… A pleasant, innocent expression, but not geeky at all.
<Now, here’s a *real* man.>
She grabbed the edge of her chair and squeezed it tightly, in an effort to keep herself from shrieking.
Believe me if I was her I would react the same way
/me hides from her boyfriend
I liked when Lois was arguing with herself...it sounds so Lois.
It's good to see Lois being nice even though I love her Mad Dog Lane look. Clark is well...Clark.... should I say more? She isn't in control for the first time and I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
Well done, Anna now I want more. Don't keep me waiting!
Super kisses,
Raquel
