Anna,

Very interesting start. What fun to see Lois be the one to fall head over heels. We really didn't get Clark's pov... it will be interesting to see what he thought of Lois! (will this be a complete role reversal, or was Clark attracted to "the brunette over there"? Or maybe he'll fall for Cat! heaven forbid.)

You also piqued my curiosity with this:

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Her last article was before her eyes. Seeing it, she remembered once again that painful night. She had never felt so embarrassed and humiliated before.

Well, she had helped arresting York Saulter, of course, a guy who had ravished twenty-six women and children.

But was it worth all this pain, all this torture, all this shame?

She took a sip of coffee. <Maybe,> she thought. <After all, nobody knows. And nobody will ever do.>
There seems to be more here than just the pain that comes from doing a story about human suffering. What, exactly, happened that nobody knows?

Looking forward to Part 2!

- Vicki wave

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