ML, I so enjoyed this part/chapter/way too short piece of fic.
Of course, I could strangle Clark for keeping shut before kissing her. He should have told her after the love thingy, the mutton-headed dolt.
And now that the bad stuff is over, all is goodie B-plot. Unless, ...
/me runs screaming. Lois will still get amnesia and then Deter Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!
Then there is New Krypton for a little while.
And I´m sure ML reads the FDK to plant cues and misdirections into her story on the last minute, when ever they fit
Carol, ML can´t be the Queen of Evil (cliffhangers) as long as she leaves me grinning like the Cheshire Cat at the end of a part. So that makes ML the Queen of Good (cliffhangers). But you, Carol may be now known as Empress of Evil (cliffhangers)
Better?
Oh, ML, if you do the ARGH you might get to be QoE again, too
Michael
