Heee! This is so much fun! Excellent work, Terry - I'm enjoying the story immensely and will be looking forward to the second part.
Totally loved reading the golf parts -- I'll have to show my BF, he'll get a kick out of it, I'm sure. Hehehe!
If I may argue over just the tiniest little thing, though... Clark would know that Lois plays golf - they were at a driving range together once, at the very start of "Witness" -- Clark even got some tips from Phil Mickelson, the lucky devil! "Don't be afraid to hit the ball, the ball's not going to hit you back" -- I, uh, know the scene by heart, it's one of my all-time favorites... *blushes* I'm a *huge* fan of Phil Mickelson. (and yeah, what can I say, I'm also a dork!)
