Thanks for the suggestions. It gives me some ideas to work with.

I'm really glad you guys are still enjoying the story. The next part should be posted soon. Just giving it a final proof read - and saw that there is something else I have to correct. (Don't you just love editing laugh )

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She was in such a good mood she let all the pedestrians in the crosswalk get to safety before taking off again.
- CC Aiken, The Late Great Lois Lane