Oh wow,

This is all so intriguing. I feel like I'm walking through a haunted house- you know that there is something that's going to pop out at you just around the corner, but you just have to keep moving forward to see what it is. The reworking of their memories is scary yet such a good touch. I personally like this approach better than having them wake up with no memories. I love the added texture it gives to see them understand the subtle (and growing) differences between their remembered and altered past.

That said- did I mention that these new memories are scary?! It almost seems that the more they push, the more their old memories start to unravel. I can't wait until they get to the Planet/Star to see what else has changed... so we can fix it.

Can't wait for more!
~Sonia


October Sands, An Urban Fairy Tale featuring Lois and Clark
"Elastigirl? You married Elastigirl? (sees the kids) And got bizzay!" -- Syndrome, The Incredibles