First - Oh no! Lois is trapped! Hope Clark is on the job. Can he rescue her (and Dr. Ledderman) from the Evil Federal Agents? And wait a minute - how did the agents find Lois in Las Vegas anyway? What was Agent White doing there? I thought (as we last saw him) that he was in Metropolis?


On a lighter note, the events at the Superman Museum were great.
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“I never did introduce my friend,” Lois said. “Jim, I’d like you to meet Clark Kent.”
What a great moment! Fanboy meets the object of his obsession, and he doesn't know it till Lois and Clark are leaving. I really hope that Jim gets to talk with Clark before the whole thing ends. That would be the thrill of a lifetime, not just for Jim, but for anyone.

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“I think the museum is going to be a lot more popular in the near future,” Lois called down.
Yeah, I think so too.

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“We’ll take several of those. Give me the ones from the TV show. I always liked those better, and the length will fit better.”
This would imply that LnC:TNAOS has been on in this world, despite what certain feedback posters have suggested. But this is our world, right?

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The system was designed to drain money in any way possible even before the gambler set foot in the casino.
Wait, have you been there? (ha ha)

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Slot machines encircled the table games, but Lois knew that these machines paid more poorly than the rest of the games in the casino. Card game players disliked the noise of a slot machine paying off, yet their spouses often played while waiting with little expectation of winning.
Shayne, it's details like this that add to the verisimilitude of your fic and make reading it so rewarding. You've obviously done your research.

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“Methane could move very easily across a rift, and with enough pressure differential it might move rapidly. The least you could expect was a massive firestorm…if it happened over a populated area the death toll could be massive.”

“So you think something like this could really happen?”

“I think something like that might very well happen. There’s a project in France I’m concerned about…”
Ominous foreboding here. Looks like a job for Superman!

Finally - more, more, more! Please continue this absorbing and wonderful fic! (And make this fic a long one, because I'm having so much fun reading it.)