I read the beginning of this story awhile back, but then for some reason just forgot about it. I caught up on it tonight, though, and it is fantastic. I can't wait to see where you are going with this.

The inclusion of Jory is intriguing. It has to be complicated enough to try to start a new job and hide that you are the new superhero in town, but then to have to take care of a child on top of that would really be a lot.

I can't wait to see the next part.