I've been enjoying this story as it has progressed so far. I really have liked your Lois and even though Clark is kind of a weinie, he still has some potential.
My only real problem is the inclusion of a kid. I can't see how it can add anything positive to the story. Of course, I hate children so that might have some bearing on my opinion.
Still, I hope that Jory is only a minor irritation in this story and it can really be about Lois and Clark and Superman. That would be my preference.
Tank (who can't see this Lois getting maternal in any way)
