Thanks everyone!

I just wanted to comment on Lois's actions here. I chose the quote at the beginning of the chapter because I felt that it resonated with the situation. Lois, by profession and nature, is a seeker of truth. Her desire to get to the bottom of things has good and bad consequences. I think that where the manuscript is concerned, she knows she's teetering on the edge of something and ultimately chooses a direction. The fallout of which... well, we'll just have to experience along side her.

I enjoyed thinking of a way to bring Herb into the story as he always had a odd fairy god-motherlike quality in the series. We'll have to see what tall tales he might have told to his son about time travel and flying men wink

Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate it.
~Sonia


October Sands, An Urban Fairy Tale featuring Lois and Clark
"Elastigirl? You married Elastigirl? (sees the kids) And got bizzay!" -- Syndrome, The Incredibles