I remember now why I didn't leave fdk for this part when I read it... *looks away in pure embarrassment* I was working on Blizzard - the first few pages, the ones dripping with N - and I read this and thought... OMG... this is brilliant and it's hot and she doesn't even need to cross the border into N. How the hell does she do that? ...and it got me depressed and... erm, I shouldn't have said that. blush

Anyway... FDK! wink

First off, the few little moments with Martha and Jonathan are wonderful! The dialog is absolutely perfect and you can totally feel the apprehension - just wonderful and perfect. smile

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Where was her mind? It was so unfair that the teensiest little part of her wished that the kiss he had given her back in that gaudy wedding chapel had been the real thing. Even knowing that it was just for show had not stopped her toes from curling.
Oooh! Toes curling. *dreamy sigh* Her head is where her heart is - trouble is that they don't speak the same language and don't understand each other very well. Shame, really.

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"Hey," Clark said as his arm went around Lois's shoulders possessively. "You're talking about my wife."
more dreamy sighs... [Linked Image] Possessive!Clark

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"I'll always back you up, Lois. Always."
*melts* I just die when he promises her "always" - I'm sure you could tell, seeing as how I used it so many times in Blizzard. blush *sigh*

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You should never kiss a co-worker when he's temporarily your husband.
*giggles* just too darned funny

That was such a great part... *sighs some more* My brain isn't able to form rational thoughts after reading this, you realize... and I'm just really green with envy. :-/

Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies