Ooh another great part!!
I just love the way you discribe everything. The places, or the looks on their faces, and the way they're dressed. I can just see the images before me!!
"Clark's in the hospital?" Jonathan dusted his hands off on the seat of his pants. "What do you mean Clark's in the hospital? What happened?"
An other great way to start the story. You really made me curious and still after reading, we still don't know the answer!

I'm just gonna keep on reading

!!
Lois let out an exasperated sigh. "Don't be stupid. If we consummate this marriage, we can't annul it!"
Ooh loved Lois reaction!
"I'd say I was the luckiest man in the world."
so sweet!!
"A real kiss?" he asked, just to make sure he understood her. "Are you sure?"
and the whole scene that followed.

wow Loved it. But I really feld sorry for Lois at the end, can't really blame her for wanting to lock herself up in the bathroom!
Makes me wonder how they're gonna act around each other now?
looking farward to next part!