Ooh, I'm so glad that people are actually enjoying this story! You have no idea how nervous I was posting this first part last night... After all the wonderful stories I've read on here.
I immediately dove for this story as soon as I saw the title because it reminded me of the Josh Groban song of the same title. That may be intentional... let me check the author's note... okay maybe not. That could be just some music obsessiveness on my part.
You were not far wrong, Laura! I have the CD and my beta and I were fishing around for a title - why is it always incredibly hard to find a title? We went through words associated with the story, and then song titles on an ITunes list (to see if anything stuck - lots of laughing there at inane suggestions...
). Finally we went to the song titles on the backs of my CD collection. Still more laughing, but we finally found the one that seemed to fit - on Josh's second CD.
I'm sorry I forgot to mention this. I guess because it's not hugely important in terms of the storyline, although it seemed to fit because of the first scene and the emotions involved also...
I'm sorry... But we couldn't have Superman hitting someone in a jealous rage, now could we?
Mmm... Clark.... Chocolate...
Trust me... I'm going to get some more use out of this metaphor yet...
Ooh! I'm so glad you think so. You see, I'm trying so hard to channel Ms Lane here... Obviously it's working!
What I don't think Clark should do is follow up Lois's juvenile intentions and bring other people into their affairs, such as Diana and Dougal. I think Perry is pulling puppett strings in this, too.
Perry is indeed. So, do you think that Clark will copy Lois? Hmm...
Please don't tell me you think this kind of behaviour is all right, Pincessanna!
No, I don't. However, since it was used in the show, it creates a very good (oh, I can't think of the word...) thing for keeping them apart for a while...
Thank you again to everyone who's posted feedback so far. I'm so glad it was received well!
~Anna.
