Well, I finally got to read this story on my day off today. And I was not disappointed.
I'm sorry that this is such a short feedback post, but really, I loved it all! I was worried at first that the relationship issues between L&C were going to be resolved too soon and too easily, but you drew it out nicely, lulling us into a false sense of security about them, and then bringing back the doubts that each had about the other! Brilliant!
I loved the waffy/sexy ending too. Thank you.
Thanks for a wonderful story to read on my day off. And now, I better stop typing before I wake someone up.
By the way though, I'm always especially grateful to those authors - like you, Sue - who willingly edit their nfic stories for the gfic folder. I, and people like me, very much appreciate the gfic love (so to speak...
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~Anna.
