well I could just agree with everything of the above :p I was really looking forward to the last part!'! It was a really good story and I saved every ''chapter'' :p on my computer so I can re-read it as often as I want, and I'm really sure I'm gonna read this again!!
I loved how it started how Lois was wondering where Clark was...so sweet!
And then this
"Out," he commanded in a clipped tone.
The first thing I thought was well actually what Lois says is he leaving her there?? But what he did was soo much better and sweeter!!! And the end just awww.
So just to sum it all up: I LOVED this story soo much!!!!! Thank you for posting it!