Hi, Smirky,
I've been lurking on the site for a while now. I wanted to wait until I'd read all of the parts that are posted.
I have to say, this is definitely *not* your average LnC fic. All in all, though, I like it.
I have a suggestion for you. If Clark, as Superman, decides (or is persuaded by Lois that) he needs to talk to someone about what happened during the time Bureau 39 had him, he could go talk to Henderson. Either him, or Perry, but I like the idea of Henderson better.
I'm also interested to see how Lois will handle his revelation speech when he tells her he's Superman/Kal-el.
I like the way you handled how she found out that he's Clark Kent/Superman/Kal-el. It was *really* good, and, as others here on the post pointed out, she didn't let her emotions get in the way.
Thanks for the interesting *late* night reading, and keep the posts coming, please!
