Hi Cat,
I guess your plan worked. More than the half story I was thinking it was Lois. But then

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“C’mon, Honey. Come back, now.”
Honey? This is the second season and Clark/Superman didn't say this to Lois when he freezed her...

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“That’s it, Baby. Fight it. Breathe for me.”
That's definitely another person. But who?

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“Cl-“ Her voice was weak and hoarse, and her mouth was too weak to work out whatever word it had been trying to say.
Clark? No, that couldn't be Clark.

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“Miss Parker, may I introduce to you Mr. Clyde Barrow.”
ahhhh, rotflol

Hope you are going on with that story!
Barb