Hi Cat,
I guess your plan worked. More than the half story I was thinking it was Lois. But then

Honey? This is the second season and Clark/Superman didn't say this to Lois when he freezed her...

That's definitely another person. But who?

Clark? No, that couldn't be Clark.

ahhhh,

Hope you are going on with that story!
Barb

That was great! Completely unexpected and very well written!

Lisa

I was totally fooled until the last few paragraphs!

Great job!

Haha, you got me too. Well done!

Jackie

It took me even longer to figure it out! LOL

Because of the "Cl..." I was still thinking it was Lois in Ms. Parker's body.

Wonderful, I too would like to see more,
Natascha

Lol, you got me too. I still thought it was Lois until the last sentence. I even thought the honey and especially the "that's a girl" was odd for Clark to say, here I was being completely gullible. Hehe. But really good job! Comic aspect of fooling me completely aside, I loved the description you used. Worked perfectly.

Laura

You had me fooled too! I was a little confused by the 'baby' and 'honey'. The killer was when she said "Cl"...of course I thought Clark, but man that was cleaver as she was really trying to say Clyde. Very awesome.

Your descriptions/writing of emotions made it feel real and on the mark. What a sensory overload that was for Bonnie.

WOW!

Even without the obvious humor, the descriptions you write are vivid and poignant. Her fear and confusion are captivating, as are her desire for breath and support.

Well done, Catherine.

Elisabeth